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A travel through the night..

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"I'll travel through the night to get back home to you<3"

We had it good, living all together,
Love around us, like an innocent white feather,
Floating in the dreams of our little one,
Sleeping in his crattle, our beautiful son.

Tranquility amongst us, nobody can break us,
No matter the hardship, no matter the trial,
We will make it worthwhile
Make it through, with a smile.

Then things get hard, 
not a single fruit in our yard,
You lower your voice; "we have no choice"
"Try to handle with the bread,
keep our child and yourself well fed.
I'll be back, don't you grief,
You'll see me before the springs first leaf"

We exchange last hug and kiss,
This is the moment I'll reminisce,
as spending every dark night,
at the window in my sight..
through the cold long winter..

Then one lovely early spring night,
As I'm holding your photo in my hands tight,
I hear a sound and get to the window.
It is you coming back home from the fight,
A fight of being apart,
of the ones close to your heart..
"I told you I'd be back :)"

Yeah, you'd do anything for your loved ones.. Can't sleep in peace till you know they're safe and sound with you.. <3 :)
This one's for the prompt challenge "Happiness is..." on Rising-Artists
"Happiness is to see your loved one arriving back home from a long journey and realising it's actually happening. The moment you see them comming, appearing to your sight, walking, (or in a car like in the photograph).. Nothing can describe the happines in your heart..
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Annamay26's avatar
:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Vision: I like how you took the picture. The sun is setting and I still see a bit of the house and background. I also like that little quote.

Originality: It's your home, so it's already original enough. It matches with your quote. Sunsets make the place look pretty.

Technique: Your picture taking skills improved. It shows brighter lights and shady area.

Impact: I'm not really sure what this means............heh. It expresses you!! Your home, place, area, state, country umm and Finland sky. This picture defines you as a really unique,caring person. It shows what a home means to everyone.