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There are people, that stay by your side,
When standing there is a reason for pride,
When being your "friend" leads them to gain,
Such two-faced folk - all they want is the fame..

Talking good, appearing nice,
Holding behind an evil device..
Raising you amongst them a beloved royal,
Making you believe, that they are loyal,

Not noticing that it is all in vain..
For the only thing they want to abstain,
Is you from removing their source of gain..

But wait for the day you need them most,
You'll learn how much such companion cost,
Cuz they will just get you completely lost.

The moment you find yourself in any trouble,
You see the illusion of the "friendship-bubble",
Pop and vanish, like it was never there,
You'll find yourself rottening left alone all bare..

"But maybe they're busy" you keep on saying,
Forget it, leave it, don't you dare,
To make them excuses when there are none,
This is the end, my dear friend, you are done...

Rejected, defected, all alone,
On the streets, left to moan..
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Mary-Jose Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry if you had to experience this part in and of life.Waaaah! 
But you made a hell of a nice poem out of this experience ! Nod 
So after all 'loss' there soemthing to gain !  Your creativity! Clap 
Well done ! Heart 
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, sorta.. I hope I did though :D thank you :aww:  and well, I gained something else through this 'loss' as well :) 
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Mary-Jose Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
To 'loose' is also to 'gain' in a way ...if you can 'see' it Emote Cuddle Love 

wish you ALL the best in 2015 my dear!! :HappyNewYear: 
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah it is true... :aww: I can see it now.. Something ends only so something else can start lol..
Thank you so much :aww: I hope the next year will be great for you too :)
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Mary-Jose Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. And everything what's good for me, even in 'bad' at the first time , will let me see more of WHO I am and in growing to be even more Love 
Wish YOU the same my dear Huggle! Heart 
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D :huggle:
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Professional General Artist
Well done.
:)
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Edited Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much.. :) lol got distracted from studying cuz having a sorta hard time.. :/ so I finished this to "release negative energy" lol... 
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Professional General Artist
Well you did well.......sorry to hear this?
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks.. :hug: and yaaa :/ well, I can only hope now to do good on the test tomorrow and try my best to do better next course.. 
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Professional General Artist
:)
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah well test is over.. :faint: soo I'm back :D
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jennystokes Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Professional General Artist
Great.
I hope you did OK????????
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well I could have always done better, but I did better than I expected :D :hug:
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digorijs Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014
I love thisHeart 
great job Clap 
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much :hug: I'm glad you like it
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KoinuPuppy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This is a fantastic piece! Very nice job ;u;
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chikuQ Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much.. :aww:
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KoinuPuppy Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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